I always liked that particular post. I wondered why it had never generated much traffic or any comments. There was no love for it at all. And it was about a circus. What’s not to love?
Let me count the ways.
First, I hadn’t read the post since I had originally hit the “publish” button. Had I taken a few moments to double-check it, I would have seen that I’d totally botched a nice little story.
The phrasing that was supposed to be ever-so-clever sounded phony. Entire sentences, and paragraphs, made no sense. Continue reading